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14 September 2008 @ 12:25 am
fanfic: crunch  

i worked on this ficcy at the dining table, surrounded by dictionaries, and files, and books, and papers, and a glass of milk. YESH, YOU GUESSED IT - CRUCIAL EXAMS ARE NEARING, AND I SERIOUSLY NEED TO GET MY ACT TOGETHER, but sadly, i have a pitiably short attention span. after this ficcy, i'll have very little time for writing stuff while i make a valiant effort to trawl through my scribbled notes, so, well - yeah...

i wrote this on monday, it festered in my computer till about thursday. just when i thought the last bit of creativity juice had evaporated, angryfacedprovided me some prompts, and ideas, so THANKS, NAT. X]

souseki_naora</lj>, this is for you! thanks for always scanning great d18/8018 doujinshi, and drawing pretty arts. X) i hope you like this, and, to everyone else, i hope you like this, too! X]

p.s. bloody html.

edit; i have the changed the font size (and probably will do the same for other ficcy posts when i have the time), so that it's easier on the eyes. :3 and, i also realised i've posted a more outdated version of the ficcy, and thus have corrected that little error. don't worry, there's not much difference; just some rephrasing, and i know you guys found stupid mistakes - say something next time! i feel incredibly retarded TOT - but i've rectified them. please tell me if you spot more errors.

Title: Crunch, for souseki_naora</lj>
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: 8018
Prompt: Baseball
Warnings: swearing, shounen-ai
Summary: Hibari is speechless, because he has never met anyone as stupid as Yamamoto Takeshi is, because there probably will never anyone as idiotic as he is, anyway...

 


“Get out of the school.”

“Yo, Hibari!”

“I’m going to shut you in, herbivore.”

“Let’s play baseball! You’ve never done it before, right?”

Out.”

The baseball herbivore continues to stand there, bat in hand, a grimy ball in the other, shamelessly flaunting his freakish, megawatt grin. Nobody with some semblance of sanity does sports in winter (skiing, etc., Hibari understands, but – baseball?). The herbivore must be deranged; his ludicrous proposal the result of a missed appointment with his psychiatrist. Generalising all herbivores as weaklings with muddy slush for brains is almost justified, Hibari thinks. Where are his tonfas? He is going to beat the bloody pulp out of Yamamoto Takeshi, that’ll teach him – ohh, he left them in the reception room, damn, and–

Yamamoto Takeshi’s hand is bigger than his. A lot bigger. Coarse, slender fingers are wrapped around Hibari’s hand, the blood bubbling beneath tanned skin, emanating gentle warmth. For a short, fleeting moment, the heat is soothing, comforting in the ungodly weather, but is somebody holding Hibari Kyouya’s hand?

“Let go. Now, herbivore.”

The fucking nerve.

“I’m not crowding,” Yamamoto Takeshi points out helpfully.

“Don’t touch me. I don’t care,” Hibari growls, flicking his wrist free of the monstrously large hand. “Don’t touch me,” he repeats, when Yamamoto Takeshi holds on, his glare scathing.

“Baseball,” Yamamoto Takeshi states, in all seriousness, “is a very fun game.”

“I don’t care,” Hibari snaps, his patience stretched dangerously thin, briskly striding back to the classroom block; he has to finish his patrol. A hard blast of freezing air blows into his face, Hibari shivers, – he cannot tolerate low temperatures – and instinctively pulls his black school jacket tighter around his shaking body. He should never have checked the grounds. He walks faster, the thick shelter of the familiar whitewashed building his goal.

Hasty footsteps, the light crunch of fragile snowflakes on grass, and Hibari knows Yamamoto Takeshi is on his tail again, chattering away like an elementary school kid – pointlessly clamouring, amicably persuading him to play, and Hibari mourns the absence of his weapons. He wants to shove those tonfas down Yamamoto Takeshi’s throat, and then some – “I hope you gag, suffocate, and die a blood-curdling death, herbivore.

“Don’t run away!” Yamamoto laughs amusedly, grabbing Hibari’s hand again, pulling the shorter boy back to the pitch (that is frosting – “Herbivore, are you blind?”).

Frustrated, Hibari tugs. Yamamoto does not let go.

Yamamoto tightens his grip, and Hibari wonders if the boy can feel his fingers trembling with the sheer cold, wonders if Yamamoto is going to say anything about it–

“If you do some sports,” Yamamoto is smiling, ingenuous, artless like a child, “you won’t feel so cold.”

The white flakes are breaking, cracking beneath the soles of his shoes, and there is the incessant gusting of chilly wind numbing his skin, and so Hibari Kyouya will convince himself later, when he is sitting by himself in reception room with the low humming of the heater in the background, that he let Yamamoto Takeshi drag him to the pitch only because the cold had taken its toll on his logical thinking.

 

 

“…so I throw the ball?”

“Yes, you throw it to me. With a sort of swooshy feeling, y’know? A dut, eeesh, and you hit with a thack kind of feeling!” his oh-so-professional instructions are accompanied by boisterous gesturing.

Hibari decides that it is for the sake of his now-turned-fragile mental stability that he ignores the unintelligible garble, and relies on his elementary knowledge of baseball.

“In a game, the batter is from the opposite team,” Hibari points out dryly.

“We’re not playing an official game! But this is the same, too, anyway! You have to feel the phoooosh!”

The ball is heavy in his hands, the material thick, and coarse, white, laced with bright red. Yamamoto stands some ten metres away, a bat held casually in position, looking expectantly at Hibari, the sharp glint in his eyes reminding the prefect that Yamamoto Takeshi is no amateur, that the black-and-white print of newspaper headlines, large, laminated certificates, and bronze, silver, and gold trophies are a testimony to Yamamoto Takeshi’s talent.

“Throw your hardest!” he shouts enthusiastically. “With a great tooooooooooosxch!”

Hibari aims for the idiot’s beaming, expectant face, because it is, plainly speaking, an eye-searing mess. And, Hibari considers it his duty as the upstanding leader of Namimori to purge the quaint little town of moronic idiots.

He solemnly watches the ball go sailing for its target, “Break his nose, break his jaw, break his nose, break his jaw, break something –“ an unending, sadistic mantra in his head. Ahh, if only baseballs could dislodge appendages…

A loud thwack, and, to Hibari’s severe disappointment, the ball goes hurtling for the other end of the pitch.

Woah!” Yamamoto exclaims, amazed, using a hand to shadow his eyes as he earnestly looks for the ball, “Was that your first time pitching?”

You cannot even call that a pitch. Pitching means a series of complicated, purposeful stances and styles that affect the ball’s velocity, and hand-signals with the (in this case, non-existent) catcher for the strike.

“I prefer it’d hit your face,” Hibari tells him impassively.

Yamamoto laughs. Hibari frowns.

“Wanna have a go at batting?” Yamamoto asks, proffering the filthy old bat to Hibari.

“No,” Hibari says, snappish, well and thoroughly agitated by now. “I want to leave. I want you to die of hypothermia.”

“What’s that?” Yamamoto Takeshi – the fucking illiterate – blinks, genuine interest in his eyes.

“Goodbye, Yamamoto Takeshi,” Hibari says acidly.

“W-wait!”

Yamamoto Takeshi’s gritty fingers are almost scalding on his skin. Hibari turns around abruptly, eyes smouldering, and he sinks his nails into Yamamoto’s forearm, indifferent to the small rivulets of blood seeping from the broken surface of skin, trickling down to his elbow, dripping onto white-tipped blades of grass.

“Stop touching me,” he hisses, “Stop touching me. Just stop –”

And Yamamoto Takeshi is suddenly so very close, there is something soft, and hot pressing against his cracking lips, warm, warm hands pressing against either sides of his face, there is something long, and wet pushing its way tenderly into his mouth, and–

Hibari bites down hard, shoving Yamamoto away as he does so. His head is light and hazy, there is a faint, coppery tang in his mouth, his legs are wobbling beneath him, and suddenly everything feels so numb. Yamamoto Takeshi stands a few feet away, perfectly still, a hand pressed against his bleeding lips.

“Hibari,” he murmurs, “Hibari. Hibari. Kyouya.”

“Shut up,” Hibari says, barely a whisper. “Shut up.”

He rushes for the gates – to hell with everything – almost running, the lingering, burning sensation of the kiss on his lips, and his legs won’t stop shaking, and he thinks he’s going to trip, but–

Yamamoto Takeshi’s fingers close around his wrist, and Hibari is seething with rage, and indignation, and herbivores really don’t learn, do they,

“I’ll bite you to –”

But Yamamoto Takeshi kisses him again, harsher this time. His arms encircle Hibari’s small, thin frame, pulling their bodies close together, hot against cold. Hibari struggles, and kicks, and thrashes, but Yamamoto Takeshi does not let go, ignoring the bruises forming on his legs, the bleeding cuts formed by Hibari scraping his nails along the length of his arm, the red teeth marks on his neck, his shoulder.

The taste of blood is strong; Yamamoto Takeshi is still bleeding, but he does not relinquish his hold on Hibari, not even when the prefect is starting to gasp for his breath, his windpipe constricted to a frail piece of straw.

 “Sto–” his voice is muffled, raspy, weak.

“Hibari,” Yamamoto whispers breathily, allowing Hibari a moment to relieve the increasingly noticeable pain in his chest, before mashing their lips together again.

When they are apart, and Yamamoto’s cheeks are flushed, and Hibari’s are a pinkish-white, Yamamoto’s smile returns, bright, and sunny as day, as if nothing happened, and that is what infuriates Hibari the most.

“Hibari,” Yamamoto bends down slowly, grasping the handle of the bat (he dropped it while they–), “…so, batting?”

Hibari is speechless, because he has never met anyone as stupid as Yamamoto Takeshi is, because there probably will never be anybody as idiotic as he is anyway, because the world has become warped, disoriented, upturned in a span of three (maybe, four, five? – Hibari isn’t so sure) minutes, and Hibari cannot understand, but there goes Yamamoto Takeshi, asking if they should continue this ridiculous baseball crash-course conducted by a mentally unsound instructor–

“After that, wanna have sushi at my place? We own a sushi restaurant, y’know? It isn’t anything high-classy-like, but the locals around here kinda like my dad’s cooking!”

What. What.

FUCKING HERBIVORE.

 
 
Current Music: Sea Legs - The Shins
 
 
 
where we ends: Hibari-Hibird OTP~ <33decolorize on September 13th, 2008 07:06 pm (UTC)
SKALJDLKDS;A LOVE~ ♥ I knew it was a good thing I checked out your journal today~ only yours. I didn't check my flist yet. FEEL SPECIAL~ |D

Ok, I really love Hibari's voice in here. It's just so him! And it was very fun almost throughout & I had this silly little grin on my face the whole entire time. And your Yamamoto is very cute, very him & OMG ABUSE OF ITALICS ARE TOTALLY LOVE. <333

Sorry if I'm not entirely coherent in this, when was I, ever =____=;; but I just woke up like, 15 minutes ago, so yeah. Love it~ :D

P.S.: Yeah. So I failed w/ the 1st comment. >>;; INCOHERENCE, I TELL YOU.
+HiRO+: WALL•Ehiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 05:33 am (UTC)
I-I FEEL VERY, VERY SPECIAL, AND HONOURED, THANK YOU!!! X3 X3 X3

I'm glad you thought the characterisations were ohkaye! That was my biggest worry, while writing this ficcy. :3 YESH, I SINCERELY APOLOGISE FOR ABUSING THE ITALICS. TOT

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING, AND COMMENTING. X] I REALLY, REALLY APPRECIATE IT.

P.S. INCOHERENCE IS A GOOD THING? XP
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라비미로labymiro: KHR18TextFucklabymiro on September 13th, 2008 08:18 pm (UTC)
Brilliant. Just brilliant LOL This is why I stay away from 8018, someone does too good a job
+HiRO+: Hibari&Hibirdhiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 05:35 am (UTC)
AHHHHHHH, I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT. X3 X3 X3 THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING!!! X]

A-AND THAT IS A WHITE LIE, Y/Y? BECAUSE THERE IS MUCH SHINIER 8018 BRILLIANCE OUT THERE.
tosshi on September 13th, 2008 10:08 pm (UTC)
So much loooove~ >w< That was great!
+HiRO+: 山獄ツナ、アイス食べているhiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 05:37 am (UTC)
I'm uberuberuber happy you liked it! ;O; THAAANK YOU! X)
do not feed the animals: boy bonks boy.izkariote on September 14th, 2008 01:13 am (UTC)
Oho~ it's been a while since I've read something for 8018. I think I like the first part of your fic best.
+HiRO+: 山獄ツナ、アイス食べているhiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 05:45 am (UTC)
I'm happy you liked this! THANK YOU SO VERY, VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTING!!! X3 X3 X3

I-I KINDA THOUGHT THE FIRST PART WAS LAME. TOT But glad you found it likeable! X]
isoyaamagiri on September 14th, 2008 05:44 am (UTC)
Hahaha...I love Yamamoto's teaching with sound effects. xD Very nice~
+HiRO+: 隠の王、壬晴、宵風hiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 05:46 am (UTC)
I-it was a last-minute thing. I almost forgot about those swimming lessons he gave Tsuna! XP

THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU, I'm happy you liked it, and thanks very muchies for commenting! X]
(no subject) - amagiri on September 14th, 2008 11:59 am (UTC) (Expand)
Atan: 8018 meganepicarcia on September 14th, 2008 06:53 am (UTC)
okay, i can't stop smiling and giggling while reading this, the internet cafe waiter keeps looking at me like i'm mad when i'm pounding my head to the keyboard...

HIRO ILUUUUUUUU ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
seriously i do. You always make good 8018 fic XDDD
and this fic certainly goes to my fave list as well XDDD
+HiRO+: 山獄ツナ、アイス食べているhiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 07:06 am (UTC)
Ackks, is your head ohkaye? ;O; N-no bruises?

I-I LOVE YOU, TOO!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

And thank you, you are so kind! ;______________; I'M UBERUBERUBER HAPPY YOU LIKED THIS. EVERYTHING WOULD BE UTTERLY MEANINGLESS WITHOUT YOUR FAVOUR. X3 X3 X3

THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU FOR READING, AND COMMENTING, AND BEING WONDERFULFABULOUSAMAZING!!! X]
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natalia: i'm so cute omgangryfaced on September 14th, 2008 09:01 am (UTC)
OH YEY, SO MY BRILIANT IDEAS HELPED!!!!

haha, if you have short attention span, i have no attention span at all. i haven't even started revising DDDDD'8 I'M GOING TO FAIL!!!!
+HiRO+: 山獄ツナ、アイス食べているhiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 11:57 am (UTC)
YESH, THEY DID. XP

DON'T SAY SUCH DEPRESSING THINGS, OHKAYE. T-TOMORROW WE SHALL START MUGGING WITH ALL OUR MIGHT!!! >O

A...A-AND THANK YOU FOR THE BEAUTIFUL PICTURE, THANK YOU SO MUCH, THANK YOU SO MUCH, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

I WANT TO HUG YOU.

PLEASE POST THE PICTURE, AND LET THE WORLD SWOON OVER IT. DO IT NAO, YOU DONKAYE. >3
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flockt69flockt69 on September 14th, 2008 09:34 am (UTC)
SO CUTEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! Your Hibari is so adorable.... Yamamoto is ... well still yamamoto hahahahahah.. Nevertheless So beautifully written!!!!

GOOD JOB!!!


+HiRO+: Hibari&Hibirdhiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 11:58 am (UTC)
THANK YOU SO MUCH. X)

I wouldn't say 'beautifully', b-but THANK YOU. THANK YOU, AND THANK YOU, AND THANK YOU AGAIN. X3 X3 X3
Like snow in summer or rain in harvest: Lulu madnesstokei on September 14th, 2008 12:23 pm (UTC)
I'm not a 8018 fan, but I love the way you write Yamamoto's instructions, complete with the most awesome sound effects. XD Hibari's mental mantra and cursing are so very him too.
+HiRO+: 山獄ツナ、アイス食べているhiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 01:11 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked those parts!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING, EVEN THOUGH YOU DON'T SHIP 8018!!! X3 X3 X3 I-it means a lot to me. X3
Janice: heartsmilodrums on September 14th, 2008 02:32 pm (UTC)
KHGBJKJGB OMGGGGGGGGGG ITS SO CUTE!! <333

WRITE MORE PLZZZZZZZZ!
+HiRO+: Hibari&Hibirdhiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 03:08 pm (UTC)
I'M UBERUBERUBER HAPPY YOU LIKED IT! THANKS FOR COMMENTING!!! X3 X3 X3

And, I-I try... X]
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Rororororo: [8018] Scarfrolololo on September 14th, 2008 02:49 pm (UTC)
Ughhhh this is SO CUTE. ♥ Yamamoto is such a cute little stalker. xD And poor Hibari--I thought his head would explode after being surprise!kissed so many times. ;___; I love how you write these two; it's so amazing. MOAR 8018 ♥
+HiRO+: 山獄ツナ、アイス食べているhiroya_chan on September 14th, 2008 03:10 pm (UTC)
I'M HAPPY YOU LIKED IT!!! X3 X3 X3 I WAS THINKING ALONG THE LINES OF SUFFOCATION, ACTUALLY. XP

Y-you flatter me, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING. X3
Bobojajbobojaj on September 14th, 2008 05:52 pm (UTC)
lkajsdflajsd, brilliant.
These are the stories that continue my ever present love for 8018.
+HiRO+: WALL•Ehiroya_chan on September 15th, 2008 06:15 am (UTC)
THANK YOU!!! X3 X3 X3 Really, thank you for reading this. (:

AND MAY THAT LOVE KEEP BURNING FOREVER. X]
fai_nekoifai_nekoi on September 14th, 2008 07:35 pm (UTC)
This was...AWESOME! *Fangirl squeel*

I was laughing so hard throught it and then the end...the end! >///< Fantastic! ;D
+HiRO+: 山獄ツナ、アイス食べているhiroya_chan on September 15th, 2008 06:17 am (UTC)
I-I AM FLATTERED!!! THANK YOU FOR READING!!! X3 X3 X3

L-laughing...? I wasn't aiming for humour, hahahax. I HAVE NO TALENT FOR WRITING STUFF THAT MAKE PEOPLE LAUGH. ;O; But thank you for commenting!!! X]
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Momoprincess_momo on September 14th, 2008 07:50 pm (UTC)
I rofl'd hard at the end. xD

This was awesome. You're awesome. xD
+HiRO+: WALL•Ehiroya_chan on September 15th, 2008 06:17 am (UTC)
T-THANK YOU...!!! ;O;
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+HiRO+: 山獄ツナ、アイス食べているhiroya_chan on September 15th, 2008 06:20 am (UTC)
ERIEA-CHAN!!! X3 X3 X3

ASDFJKLASDJF;LKJ THANK YOU ASDFJKJAHEKJNFK THANK YOU ASDFZHDSFKJVNLKJNFKJ THANK YOU LSFKGSDFVJKSANF THANK YOU!!! ;O; Thank you for always reading, thank you, thank you, thank you! ♥ ♥ ♥

And of course Hibari likes that kiss very much. >P

D-DON'T WORRY; I'M MAKING NO SENSE EITHER.

BUT THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!!! X]
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(no subject) - hiroya_chan on September 16th, 2008 11:14 am (UTC) (Expand)
rions: REBORN - 8018rions on September 15th, 2008 07:55 pm (UTC)
O-OH MY GOODNESS. ASDLAKDJLSAJLJSLAS. SLADJSALJDSAASD;;DSLKASDJ. *SPAZ ALONG* THIS. THIS IS AMAZING. ♥♥♥

I just love the way you wrote them, like how Hibari refers to Yamamoto with his full name, and how Yamamoto describes stuff with sound effect. SO. ADORABLE. <33333

And the bite. Ooh. I love that part. *A*
+HiRO+: WALL•Ehiroya_chan on September 16th, 2008 11:15 am (UTC)
T-THANK YOU. X3 X3 X3 THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING, YOU BRING SO MUCH JOY TO MY HEART. <333
idiedcauseofyou on September 16th, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
YES

that was some good fanfiction!!! And very appropriate cause I'm freezing in my own room right now >_< Very cold where I live now~~

Great job as always and can't wait for more!!!
+HiRO+: Hibari&Hibirdhiroya_chan on September 16th, 2008 11:17 am (UTC)
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING. <333

Hahahax, I don't live in a temperate country, so I'm not used to the cold, but it's getting awfully chilly here, and I can't stand it sometimes. ;O;

<333 THANK YOU FOR ALWAYS READING, THANK YOU SO MUCH. X]
ora_sama on September 16th, 2008 03:13 am (UTC)
Ahahaha, I'd forgotten how much Yamamoto sucks at giving instructions until this fic. That was awesome, with spot-on characterization to boot XD.

Also, that ending was hot (~_^)d

Geeze, Yamamoto, you're so cute ♥♥♥
+HiRO+: 山獄ツナ、アイス食べているhiroya_chan on September 16th, 2008 11:19 am (UTC)
Hahahax, I almost forgot, too! I added it in the last minute. XP

THANK YOU SO MUCHIES FOR READING!!! X3 X3 X3 YOUR COMMENT MAKES ME SMILEY LIKE A HAPPY DRUNKARD. X]
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(Anonymous) on September 16th, 2008 04:08 pm (UTC)
A fine job, this! Possibly your best yet, but you can go higher, I expect. I whole-heartedly look forward to more.

You might want to fatten up the descriptions a little more, in this case.

Best of luck for your exams. (:
+HiRO+: Hibari&Hibirdhiroya_chan on September 17th, 2008 04:16 am (UTC)
T-THANK YOU. <333
dondon: hibirdsdadonna on September 21st, 2008 12:58 am (UTC)
HEDFAHJSDDSAFHJSDFI I'M DEAD XDDDDDDDDDD FAJSD;KFJ;SLDF YOU KILLED ME AHJFSAJDFOIASDJ AFSADFJA;SDKFLASJ ;A;

SERIOUSLY YOU TOTALLY ROCK AT FANFICSSSSSSSSSSS FJASD;KFLSDFKJSD FSADJFASD JFASDFJ ASD;FJSDLFK ASJD;KEEP KEEP KEEP GOINGGGGGG!!!! JFA;SDKFASDL *FOLLOWS YOU*

BUT SERIOUSLY YOU WROTE HIBARI SO NICELY AND AND DAS;FLKS YAMAMOTO YOU LOVABLE IDIOT <333 FJD;ASFJ *is in happy lala land*
+HiRO+: Hibari&Hibirdhiroya_chan on September 21st, 2008 02:06 am (UTC)
JLAKSJD;FLIAIRGJALSDBLSDFGKLASKJFD;GLSJKHFDG PLEASE DO NOT DIE AHSOGHAKGHJAKDLJABSKVHBALKJHG ;O;

AHHHHHHS, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU - YOU FLATTER ME TOO MUCH, YOU. ;________________________________; BUT THANK YOU. <333

I AM HAPPY YOU LIKED IT!!! X3 X3 X3 ASDFHAWOELGHLKJSDGHBNMSDF
omgitsapenguin: pic#76034650omgitsapenguin on September 23rd, 2008 05:10 pm (UTC)
asdfsad so good, i wish, there was more 8018 doujins and anfics out there <3<3
+HiRO+: Hibari&Hibirdhiroya_chan on September 23rd, 2008 05:13 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading! X] I'm glad you liked it.

And I wish there were more, too. ;A;
Too odd to describe: pic#77856341crazy_ryzz on October 9th, 2008 12:01 pm (UTC)
....! I just can`t stop giggling and smiling and being like a kid in a candy store! :D
This is just something so awesome I can`t say how awesome this is. xD They are so in character and whoosh! You did great job with this! 8018 is going to own my soul after this. <3<3<3
+HiRO+: 学園キノ、ハイパーモードhiroya_chan on October 9th, 2008 12:42 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it, thank you, thank you for reading <333

MAY 8018 SUCCESSFULLY STEAL YOUR SOUL >) no, really, it's a very pretty ship, HOP ON <3
roygbivibgyor on October 14th, 2008 05:03 pm (UTC)
I reviewed this and I kept laughing~
I mean, Yamamoto how can you be so stupid, naive, annoying, clumsy, and cute at the same time! XD
+HiRO+: 山獄ツナhiroya_chan on October 15th, 2008 07:29 am (UTC)
<333
THANK YOU FOR READING!